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Gerbera_Reads
Sep 20, 2018 rated it really liked it
** 3.75 stars **

I liked most of the book. The idea of soulmates appeals to me, and here the way it happens is fascinating. From the moment they find each other, then how they still need to work on the relationship. I like that it's not perfect. I liked William more than Daniel even though he was dealing with illegal issues, he was still a decent man with his own set of demons and nightmares. He still has integrity, he is loyal and he values loyalty in return. A possessive alpha male, oh yes!

Dan

** 3.75 stars **

I liked most of the book. The idea of soulmates appeals to me, and here the way it happens is fascinating. From the moment they find each other, then how they still need to work on the relationship. I like that it's not perfect. I liked William more than Daniel even though he was dealing with illegal issues, he was still a decent man with his own set of demons and nightmares. He still has integrity, he is loyal and he values loyalty in return. A possessive alpha male, oh yes!

Daniel is a spitfire, quick-witted and is very kind. He is willing to help out others which is how he actually meets William. I liked his dedication to his work and that he didn't allow William to just bankroll everything. I did not like his sometimes childish temper tantrums but I guess him being young can excuse some of them. Otherwise I liked how he was with his guards and how he apologized when it was due. He owned up to his mistakes.

I loved secondary characters a lot. Ueda, Cameron, Tony and all the other bodyguards provided the humorous part of this book. Ken and Demetrius were kind of friendly bridge between William and Daniel when they had difficulties communicating. And during the book many of them found their soulmates which was nice!

The book would have been better if the identities of the villains were unknown, I think too much was revealed in the beginning and the air of mystery was gone. Another part that bothered me was the misspelling. I usually ignore it but when half the book the events take place in Now York and then switch to New York, I take exception to that (I mean was it an alternate world city or not?). Then I really wish more background was provided about soulmates, when and how it started, what year this all was happening but here it's not mentioned and even in the book it states that little is known about it. Well, since author created the concept, I would assume she could have created the background too no matter how fantastical it might sound. I would have enjoyed it.

Mostly it was an enjoyable read and I hope the next book will come out soon!

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Bo
Mar 06, 2018 rated it really liked it
This was a very enjoyable read for me. I really like this author's idea of soulmates. There are platonic and relationship soulmates, and you get whichever it is you need. There is an age gap, but I really liked it for this book. There were some dark moments, and William was not an innocent man. He had blood on his hands and no apologies for it. Daniel seems innocent and sweet, but he works as a criminal photographer. He's younger, but he doesn't back down from William. He makes William respect h This was a very enjoyable read for me. I really like this author's idea of soulmates. There are platonic and relationship soulmates, and you get whichever it is you need. There is an age gap, but I really liked it for this book. There were some dark moments, and William was not an innocent man. He had blood on his hands and no apologies for it. Daniel seems innocent and sweet, but he works as a criminal photographer. He's younger, but he doesn't back down from William. He makes William respect him, and he tells him he won't settle for less than all of him. William has had a tough life, and he's usually wearing a stone cold "mask" everyday. He starts to let the mask go when Daniel works his way into his heart. I love when Daniel slips his bodyguards with his crazy parkour skills. They really underestimate him due to his age. He really shows them. I loved it. There were some editing issues, and wrong words used at times which is why I didn't rate it higher. ...more
Raj
Aug 12, 2017 rated it really liked it
I quite liked this book even though it wandered into the sugar land territory at odd moments.Daniel one of the main characters was a trial at times and a sweet holy terror.What's with the overtly stubbornness exhibited by most characters in romantic fiction?It's as if their brain power trips in their quest to prove an almost unnatural independence that often lands them in mortal danger.William the anti hero was almost perfect in his darkness and was constantly kept on his toes protecting his you I quite liked this book even though it wandered into the sugar land territory at odd moments.Daniel one of the main characters was a trial at times and a sweet holy terror.What's with the overtly stubbornness exhibited by most characters in romantic fiction?It's as if their brain power trips in their quest to prove an almost unnatural independence that often lands them in mortal danger.William the anti hero was almost perfect in his darkness and was constantly kept on his toes protecting his young soulmate. ...more
Carolyn Elias
Aug 06, 2017 rated it it was amazing
William & Daniel are so real and this story is so good!

Delmire Hart is so good at creating full blown characters that you absolutely love! In this world when you're born there is a soulmate somewhere in the world which is your perfect other half. William and Daniel find that they are soulmates but this is no insta-love, they need to work at understanding each other with danger involved in their lives. They are incredibly hot together! Can't wait for her next story!

William & Daniel are so real and this story is so good!

Delmire Hart is so good at creating full blown characters that you absolutely love! In this world when you're born there is a soulmate somewhere in the world which is your perfect other half. William and Daniel find that they are soulmates but this is no insta-love, they need to work at understanding each other with danger involved in their lives. They are incredibly hot together! Can't wait for her next story!

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Jinx
This book was utterly shallow. It set my nerves on edge with the constant talk about money. I was also annoyed at Daniel's naiveté. He just allowed Will to do as he pleased and chalked it up to the whole soul-mates thing. Even if what was asked of him was unreasonable and merited common sense he just went along with it cos SOUL-MATES!

I think the author completely botched the definition of soul-mate. She took away everything that was pure about it and made it tawdry. IMO a soul-mate it suppose

This book was utterly shallow. It set my nerves on edge with the constant talk about money. I was also annoyed at Daniel's naiveté. He just allowed Will to do as he pleased and chalked it up to the whole soul-mates thing. Even if what was asked of him was unreasonable and merited common sense he just went along with it cos SOUL-MATES!

I think the author completely botched the definition of soul-mate. She took away everything that was pure about it and made it tawdry. IMO a soul-mate it suppose to be someone who balances you. Like a Yin and Yang symbol. Bringing light into your dark even if it means bringing dark in to their light.

The author missed the mark by focusing solely on Will's dark. It over-shadowed anything positive Daniel would have brought to the realtionship. Daniel didn't possess the strength it took to be apart of Will's world because he had no back-bone. The author portrayed him as weak-willed and weak-minded. He had no qualities that befitted being mated to someone in the mob.

But what do I know I dnf'd at the beginning of chapter 7, maybe Daniel came the realization that Will was supposed to complete him not consume him but I just couldn't be bothered to skim to the end.

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Zoey
Dec 29, 2019 rated it really liked it
Not bad

More of a 3 but for kindle unlimited it's a 4. It's well written and pretty hot, but obviously heavily inspired by Viewfinder. I think she could have made an inspired by Viewfinder novel without making it feel like it's a Viewfinder fan-fic just with different names and in a diff country. Like maybe make Danny's profession something other then photographer. My only other complaint was that it felt a little shallow sometimes and some of the dialogue a bit cheesy. I love some fluff so I'm n

Not bad

More of a 3 but for kindle unlimited it's a 4. It's well written and pretty hot, but obviously heavily inspired by Viewfinder. I think she could have made an inspired by Viewfinder novel without making it feel like it's a Viewfinder fan-fic just with different names and in a diff country. Like maybe make Danny's profession something other then photographer. My only other complaint was that it felt a little shallow sometimes and some of the dialogue a bit cheesy. I love some fluff so I'm not complaining about that, but maybe if the protagonists didn't seem so cookie cutter. It's hard to explain bc I love a yaoi trope but it has to be done just right. I'm nitpicking a bit bc I really like this author, I think her writing is excellent and her reads are great for destressing. I love fluff with a touch of angst when I'm needing something light to read. But I've read a few other books/novellas by this author that were really good, so I'm hoping I'll be seeing her write more and better. Still an enjoyable read.

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Sherry
Aug 06, 2017 rated it really liked it
Another great book by Miss Hart

I love the concept of this book! That there is a soulmate out there for everyone and Miss Hart takes this wonderful concept and made it great! I always love a story where the people meeting and falling in love comes from too different world. Miss Hart gave the character so much character and depth. I just feel in love with both of them and the rest of her crew in this great book.

Jessie H.
2.5/5 Stars

I read this story as Finder fanfiction first and I think it worked better. It's almost the exact same fic except with characters names changed and some parts were added to. It worked well as a fanfic because we're more familiar with the characters and their personalities and they were written well. Changing the names made the characters feel flat and their motivations/personalities weren't explained enough to make them fit.

2.5/5 Stars

I read this story as Finder fanfiction first and I think it worked better. It's almost the exact same fic except with characters names changed and some parts were added to. It worked well as a fanfic because we're more familiar with the characters and their personalities and they were written well. Changing the names made the characters feel flat and their motivations/personalities weren't explained enough to make them fit.

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Straight Girl Goes Gay
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3.5 stars

(view spoiler)[Cover
⬡ Generic but attractive

Grammar
⬡ Very few/no typos

Engagement
⬡ Memorable after I put it down for a few hours

Likes
⬡ The light D/s
⬡ The concept of soulmates and how it played out here

Dislikes
⬡ The 'villains' were a bit over the top

Sex Scenes
⬡ Decently hot and/or sweet

Character Depth
⬡ Chest deep

Emotional Depth
⬡ Weakly emotional

Mood Upon Completion
⬡ Ready for the sequel

Content Warnings
⬡ Kink
⬡ Character

My Video Review on Vimeo
My written and video reviews contain spoilers!

3.5 stars

(view spoiler)[Cover
⬡ Generic but attractive

Grammar
⬡ Very few/no typos

Engagement
⬡ Memorable after I put it down for a few hours

Likes
⬡ The light D/s
⬡ The concept of soulmates and how it played out here

Dislikes
⬡ The 'villains' were a bit over the top

Sex Scenes
⬡ Decently hot and/or sweet

Character Depth
⬡ Chest deep

Emotional Depth
⬡ Weakly emotional

Mood Upon Completion
⬡ Ready for the sequel

Content Warnings
⬡ Kink
⬡ Character death (major and/or minor)

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Eli
May 16, 2019 rated it really liked it
I really enjoyed the take on soulmates. How it wasn't taken as an excuse to get a pass on characters and relationships development. It was a refreshing read and I found myself quite taken with this sweet jewel of a romance. I really enjoyed the take on soulmates. How it wasn't taken as an excuse to get a pass on characters and relationships development. It was a refreshing read and I found myself quite taken with this sweet jewel of a romance. ...more
Elyse
May 22, 2019 rated it really liked it
4.5 stars
There is this amazing manga series called Finder with a similar premise: a young photojournalist and a handsome older crime lord. The manga is much darker than this book, here it is focus on the romance.
Photograph Daniel Miller never though he would meet his soulmate, until William Hunt, a rich business (and criminal) walk into his life.

Daniel is always trying to get a scoop; he is an adrenaline junkie and is easily getting into dangerous situations. He doesn't like to be control, is qu

4.5 stars
There is this amazing manga series called Finder with a similar premise: a young photojournalist and a handsome older crime lord. The manga is much darker than this book, here it is focus on the romance.
Photograph Daniel Miller never though he would meet his soulmate, until William Hunt, a rich business (and criminal) walk into his life.

Daniel is always trying to get a scoop; he is an adrenaline junkie and is easily getting into dangerous situations. He doesn't like to be control, is quite independent, strong will, do not care about money & keep escaping William's bodyguards. William is protective (a little bit on the possessive side) but super sweet with Daniel.

The two men do not have much in common and there is also an age gaps of 12 years between them. They still manage to make their relationship work.

The villains are classic one dimensional and doesn't have much depth: there is the jealous bar manager, the corrupted cop, the crooked politician.
I really enjoy this book, the romance was super cute & I love everything soulmate related.

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lorikayhorsfall
Intense !

This book had me from page one . The intense story line mixed with the intends passion had me completely focused til the very last line . A must read !!!

ZARIA (Sheldon Cooper lover)
Shay
Feb 19, 2018 rated it it was amazing
Love this book! I've read it over & over.
María Escalante Urbina
Great story, angst at the beginning, and then thing stars to get better. Lately it helps you see things from another perspective, and that anyone can get better with help and self love.
Delmire Hart is a little ginger kiwi born in the peaceful country of New Zealand before she migrated to the wondrous crazy of Australia. Starting off as an avid fantasy reader and nerd extraordinaire, she was that one weird kid carting around brick-sized novels with glee. This closet romantic didn't understand just what she was missing out on until she ventured into the depths of the internet seek Delmire Hart is a little ginger kiwi born in the peaceful country of New Zealand before she migrated to the wondrous crazy of Australia. Starting off as an avid fantasy reader and nerd extraordinaire, she was that one weird kid carting around brick-sized novels with glee. This closet romantic didn't understand just what she was missing out on until she ventured into the depths of the internet seeking the perfect blend of erotic and romantic. Fantasy can be as sexy and sensual as you want it to be! Miss Hart now takes great pleasure mixing steamy gay romances with magical twists and intriguing dynamics. While always a sucker for a happy ending, she is a big believer that the journey to get there is the fun part and endeavours to create varied worlds for all to enjoy. ...more

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